Foreign.

[Laura]

will you walk the sands, the oceans,
match your palms with tiny footprints,
steer yourself in only right directions,
hang off a cliff with one hand,
and walk the wall of China on the edge
with only a bottle to keep you standing?

will you touch a face that's fallen,
slide down a crested moon into a leafy pool,
ring a finger that's blistered,
grab the air like money in your pocket,
and shed every inch you have of yourself
to fit in with this patriotic country?

you're mistaken,
I'm born.

[thecrazybeautiful]

Foreign was the oneword for yesterday right? Stupid me, I didn't write anything for it.

Well what you wrote turned out nice. I like the mentions of the ocean and the moon.

"you're mistaken,
I'm born. "

Nice ending

[grifter]

nice visuals "leafy pool" makes me smile

[Only Me]

I didn't really understand it, but for it being a oneword, the imagery is great.