without inspiration

[xsavemex]

the televison is always on
never off, always on
from morning to morning
night to night
always off and never on

wait.. i kind of lost my head
maybe i should be in bed
with programs running through my mind
always going, never gone
never stopping for too long

this doesn't make any sense
no sense, always senseless
why can't i write better poems?
do i have ADD?
or am i just a little lazy..
maybe crazy..
i just don't know.
maybe i should go.

[Laura]

"always going, never gone"

--I really like the idea behind this line. It could mean so many different things. The end seemed to trail off into something else ... after this line:

"no sense, always senseless"

--it went weird. The beginning where you state the TV is always on and then later state it's always off is a little strange but it's intriguing in a way.

[Only Me]

I get it... when you lose your concentration... things get jumbled. but yea. i do like the concept of "always going, never gone" that seems to be the whole journey of my life so far... lol

[Sharon]

wow... I think we're all big fans of the line "always going, never gone" - I know everyone can relate to that in some way or other.