What best friend?

[QueenPaige4]

Best friends
What does that mean?
Always being there for each other
in their time of need
Telling each other secrets
Talking about boys or girls at school
Writing notes
Sharing things
Borrowing movies, books, and clothes
Being silly
Acting crazy
but what holds a friendship together?
Is it the common characteristics or the trust?
The same interest or the love?
When two people become
best friends it's great
When they lose
each other it's sad
And I don't want that to happen
Between Jen and I
but she's pushing me away
Using me like a RAG
Saying I'm completely useless
And that's no best friend at all
or even a friend
But I continue to stay
in fear of losing the one and only person
I can trust
Act crazy with
Borrow her things
Be there for her
Talk to her about
nothing and everything
at the same time
And no one can full fill her place
She's one of a kind

[thecrazybeautiful]

Ah, the subject of best friends. I could go on and on talking about how I fell on the matter, and I could go on and on about my "best friend" but I'll keep the rambling to myself.

You describe it as such a wonderful thing to have a best friend, and I know it should be. I just wish I could have everything that I want in a best friend in the person I call my best friend.

This is sweet, but as a poem it could use work. I don't really know what to suggest though.

[Laura]

I've noticed you like to question a lot in your poetry. You always write about a subject where you find yourself confused or frustrated. That's not necessarily a bad thing though

The poem itself is kind of bland. I'm not really sure how to comment.

[QueenPaige4]

Laura you know me through my poetry thats just great..the more you read them the more you understand the author or in this case poet...honestly i like this poem i think it flows well...but you'd have to understand what i was going through when i wrote this and you might see it through a different perspective