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Post by xxrebel86xx on Feb 7, 2006 19:23:45 GMT -6
I'm stuck in the middle, Of something I did, Washing pain and hatred over me.
I see how I hurt you, And how I could say I was sorry, But I couldn't.
You've done this to me, Why can't I do it back.
I'm paralyzed, From my mind to my lips.
Anything I say, Could hurt you, And me...at the same time.
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Post by Laura on Feb 9, 2006 15:43:29 GMT -6
"I see how I hurt you, And how I could say I was sorry, "
--yes and how you never say you are ... I've been there. I'm unapologetic what can I say?
"Anything I say, Could hurt you, And me...at the same time"
--I like this idea but I think it would sound a little better like "and me at this time ..." or something like that ... I don't know. I'm a blabber so don't listen to me. A better piece I've seen from you.
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