Mommy, Where are you??

[cassi <3]

This is a poem I wrote a while back about my mom. Things were shakey for a while, and my past came back to me.

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Mommy, where are you?
You say you're there,
but I dont feel it.

Mommy, where are you?
Why do you hide?
Do you hate me that much?

Mommy, I know you're sick,
but why bitch at me 24/7?
You're not my mommy!

Mommy, where are you?
You used to understand me,
it's like you dont know me.

Mommy, I'm sixteen,
I need your attention;
but dont keep me from growing.

You left me home alone.
I was only a baby,
and I still remember.

Mommy, you whored around;
People think I'm not daddy's.
Am I not?

Why are you like this?
I'm reality, look at me.
I thought you'd see,
how much it hurts.

Open your eyes mommy,
look what youve done;
You lost me.

It's not my fault,
You made me think so.
I hate you!

I can't breath,
I'm crying too hard.
I have to let it out.

Can't you hear my pain?
My tears?
My screams of hate?

Mommy, you're not my mommy,
not anymore..
you left.

Mommy, where are you?

- your baby <3
... no more

[Only Me]

wow! I can totally relate. Welcome to the boards. I have not been on in a long time so this is your first piece that I have read. Great work and I look forward to seeing more...

[Sharon]

[glow=purple,2,300]very well written! there's a typo in the 11th stanza (breathe instead of breath) but good job thank you for sharing this with us[/glow]

[Laura]

I don't know if it's me but I don't understand this stanza:

"Mommy, I know you're sick,
but why pregnant dog at me 24/7?
You're not my mommy!"

[Sharon]

sweetpearl said:

I don't know if it's me but I don't understand this stanza:

"Mommy, I know you're sick,
but why pregnant dog at me 24/7?
You're not my mommy!"

[glow=purple,2,300]oh that's because of the censory on the board.. it turns b**ch to "pregnant dog"

i'll see if i can find a way to turn it off
[/glow]

[Laura]

Ohh!! D*mn those censor features ... can't you turn them off? I mean, if people are offended, they shouldn't be on a writer's board, in my opinion. I don't even consider any word "bad" except racial driven words. The usual swear words come off as nothing to me. Ah well.

[Angelamongsociety]

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[Angelamongsociety]

Sorry pressed onto to fast. I was like "what?" when I read the pregnat dog part! Anyways, this poem is realy sad. I hate when parents don't take care of thier responciblities as a parent. It's very sad. Gret job.

[cassi <3]

Thank you all for your feedback.

Sorry about the whole delay on poems tho, I'm a bit grounded. So no poems unless I have time in school or at the library.(which i really never go to haha) Gtg, busy in class.<3