ever have an unknown enemy that is known

[suicidetank]

to no enemy

what quarrel have you with me
cant you pretend that i am dead
why must i stay your enemy after all these
years youve only learned to hate me more
pitiful how you despise what you've made
it only angers you when i dont insult you as well
i'll never be like you and that also angers you
your curses and yelling wont break me
but you dont seem to get it youve runned me out
and brought me back in you dont need me you say
i laugh each and every time you say this
your greatest and only usefull insult is calling me your
son how someone like you was blessed a mother to
only spend your time trying to bring me down is an
insult to life I only hope your rest peacfully

[Xanthic Flower]

[glow=red,2,300]It reminds me of a letter.[/glow]

[Only Me]

omg... i feel that way about my own mother... only i put it into different words... maybe sometime I will post some of the words i have put together to form my thoughts on my relationship wiht my mother... Keep up the writing... when you hit the bottom the only way to go is up and it seems as if you are on an elevator...

[allmeheart]

i can relate, sadly, i can always relate to poetry thats not happy, figures...., good work on this, continue to write

[Sharon]

[glow=purple,2,300]needs to be revised but no doubt an emotional piece.[/glow]