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Post by Absinthe on Aug 22, 2005 13:24:47 GMT -6
[glow=black,2,300]Side spliting laughter,
joking,
dancing,
singing,
screaming,
You and I
spending infinite nights
and boredom-ridden days
making memories,
mending broken hearts,
forging a friendship.
Unsinkable,
never ending,
everlasting,
our friendship
will one day be written among the stars.
*Not my best, but it was a spur of the moment write. What do you think?*[/glow]
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Post by Laura on Aug 23, 2005 12:11:05 GMT -6
I thought it was interesting. I liked how it was easy to speak and I can relate to this although my experience doesn't have a happy ending.
"spending infinite nights
and boredom-ridden days
making memories,
mending broken hearts,
forging a friendship."
--was my favourite part. I can feel the realness of it.
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Post by QueenPaige4 on Aug 25, 2005 11:03:14 GMT -6
that was great.
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Post by Only Me on Aug 29, 2005 18:30:06 GMT -6
i like how it uses words o spin in circles instead of using indefinite terms... You know what i mean?
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Post by Sharon on Dec 20, 2005 21:21:07 GMT -6
[glow=purple,2,300]i liked it. simple. a pleasant read [/glow]
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