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Post by Laura on Mar 26, 2006 18:43:45 GMT -6
a/n: yes, this is about zombies. I'm bored of writing about the usual love.
Redead Love is Still Love
destiffed, unlift these eyelids so heavy on my skin see you eating, make a new meaning of grubbing off your palm hearing those bones crack, and shake the leftovers off your chin no plates or napkins here
you're walking hunched over, blood rushing out the sides of your mouth I can still smell the stench of fresh meat starting to mold on your lips and who are you now, you're dead without identity all your fingers met a raging chainsaw
please take me with you to that grave I want to go with you.
you're walking half backwards, semi-forwards, split in two you walk as if you are a fork in the road, confused with frustration you're blind and an easy target to a hidden land mine crowded in a decaying jacket full of earth worms and filth
but the way you roam the sewers like a bully in a school soaking what's left of your shoes and socks, you look to rule you're havoc, chaos, an accident, betrayal to the world missing teeth and missing cells to function correctly
and there goes one less civilian, their spine riding down your throat no longer will they scream in terror, they're dying faster you're not vicious, you are as calm and gentle as they come and I just want to hold you
please take me with you to that grave where you lay to rest when night time retires and the sun rises burning whatever flesh left
please take me with you to your grave, I want to lie beside you.
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Post by thecrazybeautiful on Mar 31, 2006 17:35:20 GMT -6
Well, this isn't the usual love Very different take on a love kind of poem, but of course you were able to make it... I don't really know the word... Interesting, I guess. It's good in that dead-love kind of way. And the title is awesome.
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stupidxgirl
A Devoted Distraction
So You Sailed Away...
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Post by stupidxgirl on Mar 31, 2006 19:37:49 GMT -6
This was so dark, I loved it though! It was a very, very interesting take on love. Wonderful job
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Post by QueenPaige4 on Apr 8, 2006 7:34:45 GMT -6
i liked it good job
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Post by Only Me on Jun 24, 2006 0:03:42 GMT -6
my favorite lines are "please take me with you to that grave I want to go with you" and "please take me with you to that grave where you lay to rest when night time retires and the sun rises burning whatever flesh left
please take me with you to your grave, I want to lie beside you. " because it seems so erotic and off limits, you are describing a scene that should make a person want to run away and hide but you still want to go to the grave with the zombie. It just seems so erotic. I am trying to think of the word that I want to use to describe it but I can't. maybe later.
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