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Post by Sharon on Oct 4, 2007 21:54:48 GMT -6
Like many jagged little blades piercing through the softest part of me, You won't let go oh no - the one that can't let go is me. Hanging on to this something something that isn't meant to be why can't I find the strength to not care why do I let you have this power over me Can it really hurt more than this? Have I got anything to lose? To be with you or to not be with you Why is it so hard to choose?
as I write these words each letter complimenting the pain I don't know why it doesn't make sense but I just keep on writing seeming to relish this ache again ...and again.
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Post by Absinthe on Oct 4, 2007 23:31:40 GMT -6
I liked that Sharon. It's raw and pure....maybe not the most wonderful technically, but great in its own way. I know the feeling. I so wish I didn't but I do and I wish you didn't either. Glad to see you writing again.
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Post by Sharon on Oct 5, 2007 7:50:47 GMT -6
I liked that Sharon. It's raw and pure....maybe not the most wonderful technically, but great in its own way. I know the feeling. I so wish I didn't but I do and I wish you didn't either. Glad to see you writing again. Thanks - yeah... it's been a while huh?
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suicidetank
Contently A Distraction
very well then
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Post by suicidetank on Apr 13, 2010 14:55:16 GMT -6
love lost is a love worth losing
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Post by Sharon on Apr 9, 2014 20:44:45 GMT -6
Gosh it's been so long since I wrote this one... Looking back I actually really like how it turned out!
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