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May 7, 2007 16:34:00 GMT -6
Post by thecrazybeautiful on May 7, 2007 16:34:00 GMT -6
--My return to the poetry board!!! However, it's sad to say- I'm newly 15, and heartless.
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peeling through thick layers of skin unknown to me, dismantling my protective cage of bones, untangling messy lengths of veins and arteries, tracing them to their original start,
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I am searching for my heart
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Jun 2, 2007 21:00:27 GMT -6
Post by Absinthe on Jun 2, 2007 21:00:27 GMT -6
This is short, but I liked it. I think I actually like it a lot more than most of your other stuff. It's poigniant, yet simple. I like.
As for being 15 and heartless - let me just say how much I wish I were 15 again. Sadly, certain things tend to get harder with age. With maturity may come understanding, but sometimes with understanding come despair.
Hopefully your 15th year won't be so bad as you think and maybe even the 16th will be better.
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Jun 3, 2007 8:36:05 GMT -6
Post by NotSoPerfect on Jun 3, 2007 8:36:05 GMT -6
16 and 17 were my favorite years, so get ready!
I liked the poem. It was concise and descriptive, which is quite a feat, so nice job.
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