peggi
Wishes To Be A Distraction
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Post by peggi on Jan 27, 2007 13:57:19 GMT -6
  darkness dwells within hides me in its black cover i long for my death
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Post by Sharon on Dec 8, 2008 18:06:11 GMT -6
It might be because I've never been too fond of Haikus... but I didn't really get anything out of this piece. It was short...and it's not really anything I haven't read before.
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nomad
Contently A Distraction
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Post by nomad on Dec 31, 2021 19:05:32 GMT -6
I love haiku, I have even tried creating haiky myself, however, I am not very good at it. I cannot follow the 5-7-5 pattern.
I just loved this haiku.
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