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Jan 18, 2007 23:36:15 GMT -6
Post by Cullen on Jan 18, 2007 23:36:15 GMT -6
I find this poem deppressing, although oddly amusing ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` If one could fill an empty soul With the tears a young one cries Could that same person fill a heart With forgotten loves and lies
If one could fill an empty heart With these loves and lies Could that same person make an art Of making strangers cry
If one could make this sacred art Bringing strangers sorrow Could that same person one day see The events of tomorrow
If seeing is believing Yet in each belief lies lie How would one collect the tears The young ones hath now cried
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Mar 17, 2007 13:28:12 GMT -6
Post by Absinthe on Mar 17, 2007 13:28:12 GMT -6
Hmm....I actually liked this. The rhyming was rather predictable and a tad bit forced in a spot of two, but nevertheless, I liked it.
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