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Post by sharonslover on May 1, 2006 10:51:39 GMT -6
i was bored in class today so i thought the one person who ever got away for messin with me so i listened to some foo fighters (cause they rock!!!!) and i just spit this out i actually didnt even give it a second look
No way back from where I’m gonna send you For all the pain you put me through can you remember All the misery lies remarks you threw in my face Its not history its not in the dark your gonna be in the place Where you realize my bark is not as worst as my bite ya swimming with sharks So start to swim for ya life
Can you feel me? Still I'm crying inside Revenge can’t heal me Feel me dying inside Sweet sweet revenge Sweet like sugar bitter like vinegar Sweet sweet revenge only when its pure it tastes sinister
After you died I realized It wasn’t worth it to kill you But to see your eyes run dry So I see the coward the real you Only then would you truly die Cause you left being loved So I still am tormented inside Even though your below of above And its killing me Cause the worst of you is still in me
I steal feel you Even though I killed you You avenged the avenger And that’s more bitter than vinegar Sweet sweet revenge sweet like sugar bitter like vinegar sweet sweet revenge only when its pure it tastes sinister
i hope you like i dont even know if i do yet
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Post by thecrazybeautiful on May 1, 2006 16:06:22 GMT -6
So is this like a rap? That's what it really seems like, and I kinda like it. "Where you realize my bark is not as worst as my bite" Ooh, I like it. "After you died I realized It wasn’t worth it to kill you" So when I read that part I started laughing. I know it shouldn't be funny to laugh at a mention of killing someone, but it struck me as funny the way it was all out and said. It sounded a little like you were going to say something nice about the person, but you fooled me "sweet like sugar bitter like vinegar" I really like that line. Maybe it's the rhyming, but I really do like it. It would be interesting to hear this being sung.
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lanaia74
Contently A Distraction
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Post by lanaia74 on Dec 13, 2006 5:45:23 GMT -6
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ibjumblin
Wishes To Be A Distraction
I don't want to wake up, the fantasy world means so much more to me than real life ever could.
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Post by ibjumblin on Dec 13, 2006 22:51:41 GMT -6
Can you feel me? Still I'm crying inside Revenge can’t heal me Feel me dying inside I like that part. Ha, I wish I knew what this would sound like! probably pretty cool
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