Send Our Love Away

[Laura]

a/n: Sharon gave me this inspiration when she said "ticklish" heh, so thanks Sharon ... you tell me if it was worth it

Send Our Love Away

you trace your finger down my front
from my neck through the valley separating my breasts
and down to my belly button
all that and my spine still tingles
even though you haven't touched it

you say your fingers could break right off
touching my skin the way you do
and you say my smile raises the skin on your arms
and tickles every sense you own
you say you wish you could capture it

and send it off as love -
send it off to someone without it

the breath you breathe puts fire in mouth
and it sparks its way down my insides
catching itself every once and a while
now my lungs burn and my voice hurts
just from touching you

you say my finger nails sliding down your back
is the equivalent of walking on water
the higher I go, the more heavenly you feel
you say it has this effect on you
and you say this affection is all you could ever ask for

our beatings are not parallel
but you say it's for the better
and we can thrive on each other
you say my honesty and your energy
you say we could be something

and we can only hope this lasts
healing and learning together
you say it means everything to you
and that my hands treat every wound you've encountered
and you say you wish you could capture it

send it off as love -
send it off to someone without it.

[Oxel]

I love it

[grasshopper]

Oh this is a beautiful poem. I really like it a lot. The ending just makes me stop completely and think really hard.

[thecrazybeautiful]

"and send it off as love -
send it off to someone without it"

That part brings alot of thought to me. The repitition of it was used well also.

This whole thing seems a bit different, but you've given it alot of good descriptions, and it turned out nice