God, I think I love you.

[xxrebel86xx]

Whenever we talk,
I can't hold my breath,
All I wanna say "I love you."
Your all I want at this moment,
Your all I need.
When I get to see you,
I'm going to try not to kiss you.
Because I don't want to ruin our friendship.
I love you in the way,
Where I would do anything to see and be with you,
Even if your far away.
You mean a lot to me, Matt.
I just hope you see that I'm "inlove" with Gerry.
And I want to have a try with him.
It's just,
God, I think I love you.

[Laura]

The ending was too weird for me ... putting the names in there and talking about how you're "in love" with this other guy makes the poem seem strange. What do you mean you are "in love" ... it makes it seem like you are seeing a guy you don't love and you love someone else but you still want to pretend you're in love with the guy you're with ... it makes it seem like you're a bad person in a way. I don't know ... that's me.

[Sharon]

hm, interesting. gonna have to agree with Laura though. since this is love related i'm moving it to the love poetry. thanks for sharing

[stupidxgirl]

It seemed too personal with adding the names at the end and it sounded kind of childish toward the beginning. Love is a strong emotion and and if you're pretending you love the guy your with but you really love someone else...what exactly is the point of love in your eyes? But that's my personal opinion.

[grasshopper]

sweetpearl said:

The ending was too weird for me ... putting the names in there and talking about how you're "in love" with this other guy makes the poem seem strange. What do you mean you are "in love" ... it makes it seem like you are seeing a guy you don't love and you love someone else but you still want to pretend you're in love with the guy you're with ... it makes it seem like you're a bad person in a way. I don't know ... that's me.

I agree with this. No offense of course.