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Post by deadhunger06 on Sept 19, 2007 10:33:16 GMT -6
moonlight
the moonlit sky greets me tonight. it feels a bit awkward to be standing here again, after i locked myself inside the confines of my misery. its like ive only been out for the first time, under this sky, streams of stars are above my head. but it doesnt feel the same without that certain light above me.
time passed, the storm of my troubled being has calmed. still, the seed that was planted still grows, still budding. i dont know when it shall bloom again. but one thing is for sure, it will never look away from that one certain light. until that day it shall bloom again.
metaphores are not my thing, so is writing. but i know this much: if writing could ease the ramblings of my heart and mind, i will. if my words could touch through the walls of a stone heart, i shall speak... even if it kills me. to the last of my breath, i will.
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nina
A Devoted Distraction
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Post by nina on Feb 10, 2008 12:59:54 GMT -6
Aww, I really like the last paragraph. It is very inspirational. Keep up the good work!
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Post by Isabela on Feb 10, 2008 13:25:54 GMT -6
'locked myself inside the confines of my misery'
I like how you wrote that, I think I can kind of relate sometimes. I also like:
'if my words could touch through the walls of a stone heart, i shall speak'
I like this too, reaching beyond the line, venturing further then most can. It's what I get from it anyways.
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