Seven Sunsets

[Cullen]

Give me the day with seven sunsets,
When the world will fall to darkness,
All may be surrounded by fear.
Hope shant be lost in the darkest hour
Because romance is found in tragedy,
Yet hopes to result in comedy.

If the sunrise never comes,
I will still revel in the memory
Of your eyes, your lips,
That tango of tongues.
And if the world falls apart
You and I will live forever

Forever and a day
Nothing is eternal,
But it'd be worth the try,
So bring me the day
With the seven sunsets
So I can prove this love.

[Laura]

I like this ... it's hard for me to critique love poems (sooo not good with them). The three first lines of the second stanza are my personal favourite, it is romantic sounding - scares me a little

This is a nice little write, I think it's more romantic than cute and I find that hard to find these days.

[Cullen]

sweetpearl said:

I like this ... it's hard for me to critique love poems (sooo not good with them). The three first lines of the second stanza are my personal favourite, it is romantic sounding - scares me a little

This is a nice little write, I think it's more romantic than cute and I find that hard to find these days.

Thanks, i forgot that i wrote this. It was just kind of a spur of the moment thing.

[Isabela]

I really liked this one, 'tis very pretty. Gave me a bit of an image too, good job and thanks for sharing.

[nina]

I really like this one! I love the rythem and balance you gave to it. Tis' a very pretty love poem.