LUV.EXE

[Cullen]

lol, here's something i kind of just threw together.

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Circiuts up, hearts in overdrive
Suddenly I feel so alive
You may just think its sappy
When its you that makes me happy
You take away my fears
You dry up all my tears
It all seemed like so much fun
When the codes were all zeros and ones
But when im around you
Every code has its two
These feelings aint acute
But in my mind: "Does not compute"

How can this all be
My hearts just circutry
Beneath this skin of steel
This has to be so real
It all feels so enlarged
When I find I'm fully charged
The codes were all so right
But the errors kept me up all night
Now i know you thinks its cute
Run program, love dot execute

[QueenPaige4]

I like it. It's very simple and nice.

[thecrazybeautiful]

I thought the idea was really cute! And I loved the first two lines.

[Isabela]

Aww it was cute, you know 'throwing things together' really works for you. Great work and thanks for sharing.

[The Brutal Immortal]

thats way kool man... i liek how you just took the idea of a computer program and ran with it in a way makin it into a pretty sweet poem

[nina]

I agree, you make a computer program sound like it could have a heart and be in love. So cute!!!!!