A wonderful thing

[QueenPaige4]

She walks into the classroom
Scars up and down her arms
They stare and whisper
She slowly walks towards the desk all the way in the back
They all turn to watch her
The teacher says "Good morning class."
It's only 1st period
This day is going by way too slow
She pays attention and writes everything down
She gets up to walk out
Then he stops her dead in her tracks
She looks down on the ground
He smiles at her
This is the beginning of a wonderful thing
Called Love

[NotSoPerfect]

Interesting

[QueenPaige4]

Thank you

[Sharon]

I liked how there seems to be that concept of change at the end and a peek of light for the girl.

This day is going by way to slow

the word "to" should actually be "too"

Didn't care too much for the poem myself, felt it was a little lacking in emotion if that makes sense, but that's just my opinion.

Thanks for sharing this with us, keep writing!

[QueenPaige4]

well i guess its more of a personal piece and if you knew the story behind it you would understand and possibly say that it had emotion. But thank you for your opinion sharon