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Post by Laura on Oct 26, 2005 18:26:04 GMT -6
would you have loved to be strange with me? hide in the shadows even when the sun wasn't out? and give up all your emotions just for a vinyl recording from 1966 - we would have danced until our feet sored until my toes cracked and my soles bled I'd never wish to be anywhere else but with you.
how would you like your flowers? dried and dead, I'm sure you'd be surprised if I showed up at your door 17 years later holding a frame of pretty roses I dug them for you now I picked them for us.
how do flowers symbolize love?
I could think of many ways to be happy but with you is all I picture my mind runs circles and spills out poetry my hands only work for you they only come up with stories to tale your heart
will you be mine tonight?
would you have been different with me? shedding our skin to find the real beauty that's buried underneath and I would have reptiled with you until time came to an end I would have never wished to be anywhere but here.
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Post by Sharon on Oct 26, 2005 19:00:49 GMT -6
[glow=purple,2,300]oh that was a VERY enjoyable read, great job! [/glow]
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Post by Absinthe on Oct 26, 2005 19:25:04 GMT -6
[glow=black,2,300] Oh, that was really good. I love it. The description is absolutely original and definitely catching. Nice job! [/glow]
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Post by Only Me on Oct 30, 2005 16:06:23 GMT -6
"shedding our skin to find the real beauty that's buried underneath" my favorite part. great work as always!
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Post by allmeheart on Nov 22, 2005 18:25:44 GMT -6
loved it, its just that the first fwe lines i thought could have been worded differently to make it flow better but that was your choice and i respect that, keep writing nice work
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