Lady Penguin
Wishes To Be A Distraction
I'm a poet and I know it!
Posts: 21
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Post by Lady Penguin on Mar 11, 2007 15:59:31 GMT -6
Love
Love can live, love can die, Love can even make you cry, Love can help, Love can kill, Love can be faked at will,
Love can be true, love can be false, Love can defeat hate and all else, Love can fly, love can fall, Love can destroy it all,
Love can float, love can sink, Love can really make you think, Love can jump, love can trip, Love can make your heart flip,
Love can run, love can be slow, Love can put on a great show, Love can sing, love can dance, Love can ruin your only chance,
Love is amazing, love is here, Love is creating laugh and tear, Love is a smile, love is a cut, Love is...Love is I don't know what.
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Post by Absinthe on Mar 16, 2007 15:52:36 GMT -6
I'm not a fan. The repetition of love became irritating after hte first stanza and the poem as a whole seems kind of like something that would be found on a corny Halmark Valentine's card. It's mushy and gushy and hasn't got any emotion at all.
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