Five-line poems

[karl]

one love
one verse
one weeping
-five minutes of
fourteen years

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i sit here every night
i listen to music
i think about love
i compare the past and future
in the present

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that night
he stopped thinking about her
and fell asleep
only to find
that she was still there with him

[Xanthic Flower]

[glow=red,2,300]I liked those poems. They're simple but they get the point across. Kind of like haikus, but not.[/glow]

[allmeheart]

i agree w/ Xanthic Flower

[karl]

Thank you. I'm quite proud of those poems. They bring me back to exactly how I felt when I wrote them, almost a year ago.

[QueenPaige4]

those were very good. good job. Keep up the good work.

[Only Me]

short and too the point... me likes!