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Post by The Sightless Dreamer on Aug 4, 2005 20:53:45 GMT -6
I love someone with no name The person lifts me up when I fall He gives me peace when i have no mind; I love someone with no name
Someone can make me laugh Somone can make me cry Someone is the sun in my clouds Someone makes me smile;
Somone loves me with no name I hope I'm someone that'll never fade Someone always knows what i want Someone loves me with no name;
Someone picked me up off the ground someone turned my head upside down Someone tatooed my name in his heart Someone turned my life around
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Post by Only Me on Aug 6, 2005 0:32:22 GMT -6
i really like it... kind of mysterious and intriguing... (intriguing? spelling?) hmm?
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Post by allmeheart on Aug 20, 2005 13:41:30 GMT -6
i agree, very mysterious, nice job
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Post by Sharon on Aug 21, 2005 13:58:05 GMT -6
[glow=purple,2,300]i am not a big fan of the repetition of the "someone's", maybe it's just me looking at it though, i think that this would make a pretty interesting song. [/glow]
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Post by Laura on Aug 24, 2005 11:57:59 GMT -6
I agree with Sharon on this. The repetition is kind of dragged out too much. I like the part about the tattoo ... I love that word.
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Post by The Sightless Dreamer on Sept 7, 2005 17:34:17 GMT -6
see the someone i couldnt find another word for so i used someone.. as a sub.. so i think i just used someone cause it was easy and really i didnt have a name at the time
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