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Post by Only Me on Jun 18, 2005 23:22:03 GMT -6
[glow=red,2,300]My heart says yes,
My head says no!
I want to be with you forever,
but I dont want to feel this pain any more
You and I were meant for each other
Our hearts, when combined, beat as one
I listened to my heart and said those binding words
Bound myself to you forever, in front of God, family and friends.
I listened to my heart on that fateful day.
Now I can only hear my head,
To me it is screaming
"No, Run away! It's never too late!"
I sometimes wonder if you are my mistake,
that maybe you're not my one true mate?
That maybe I got my head and my heart confused.
No, that can't be
Because when we're together it all feels right.
My head is screaming no,
all the while my heart is whispering gently "He's the one!"[/glow]
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Post by BlueMoon on Jun 19, 2005 22:00:23 GMT -6
Don't you hate it when your heart and your head don't agree? This was a good topic for a poem, creative.
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Post by 303e on Jun 20, 2005 9:58:55 GMT -6
Very good job!  |
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Post by allmeheart on Jun 22, 2005 13:37:46 GMT -6
lol i agree, nice poem, my head and my heart usually disagree, but thats because i've lost brain cells
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Post by QueenPaige4 on Jun 25, 2005 9:30:11 GMT -6
yes this was a very good topic. I liked the poem. I really think that the heart and mind always disagrees mostly because the heart is usually always right but the mind has common sense that the heart does not have. That just makes them fight more often. Very nice poem. Keep up the good work.
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Post by Only Me on Jun 27, 2005 3:08:27 GMT -6
thank you all for the feedback i always apreciate positive comments... this poem i know relates to alot of different things in my life but it was mainly about my relationship with my husband when we hit a very rocky spot. I was down and out about how certain things were going and wrote this to sort of get my feelings out... I am really glad ya'll liked it.
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Post by Sharon on Jul 13, 2005 13:28:23 GMT -6
[glow=purple,2,300]Personally, I tend to listen to my head more than my heart. This is mainly because my heart has its way of finding itself in trouble and things just simply don't work out. I really liked this piece, here are just a couple of things I thought I should point out, if you're thinking of revising. [/glow] [glow=red,2,300]No, Run away! Its never to late![/glow] [glow=purple,2,300] It's and too[/glow] [glow=red,2,300]Because when we're together it all feel right.[/glow] [glow=purple,2,300] feels[/glow] |
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Post by Only Me on Jul 15, 2005 19:53:24 GMT -6
lol thanks sharon and welcome back!
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Post by Absinthe on Jul 19, 2005 18:15:31 GMT -6
That was pretty good. It reminded me of this little thing I wrote when I first started getting into poetry.
You are so annoying,
the worst I've ever met.
When you're near my skin crawls,
I've seen no good qualities yet.
My head tells me one thing,
My heart strongly disagrees.
My head says you're wrong for me.
My heart makes me weak in the knees.
I think your poem is so much better. Excellent job on that.
Unfortunately I am one who tends to listen to her head and keep her heart screaming in silence. Perhaps, following my heart once ina while would be better? Anywho, getting off topic.
Great poem.
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Post by Samccaleb on Sept 10, 2005 22:26:05 GMT -6
Great poem. I have yet to let my heart get the better of my head but then again thats probably why I'm still single  |
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Post by Only Me on Sept 15, 2005 22:32:25 GMT -6
lol... true true... he he... word... *couldn't resist* showing the love... are you feeling it?
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