my lady, my love for you is the way

[grifter]

My lady, my love for you is the way
Spring loves June,

full of fervent fractures of sky
striving for the perfect pressure
of unexpected rain on your skin.

And as night eludes the sun
your love is wherein
the edge of the fog,
newest flowers gingerly pout

with a pleasing parting of petals.

[Laura]

Ahhh I can't pick a favourite part, it's all such yummy goodstuff that I can't even think of words right now. It's just so lovely. Makes me want to be loved

okay, this is my favourite line:

"full of fervent fractures of sky "

[thecrazybeautiful]

"of unexpected rain on your skin. "

On such a sad day for me, this makes me smile.

As always, this is really good.

[Sharon]

full of fervent fractures of sky
striving for the perfect pressure
of unexpected rain on your skin.

To me, this is the strongest part in the whole poem.

with a pleasing parting of petals.

a great visual you've left us with there. thank you.

[Absinthe]

I love this....I cant even explain why. It just sits well on the tongue, the taste of it sweet and pure. Great job.