Middle of Me

[Laura]

a/n: lately I can only write about love...wrote this while listening to Soil's album "Redefine" the songs Pride, Redefine, and Can You Heal Me?

Middle of Me (my musician is the storm, the light, the GOD)

yes,
I can say it clearly
you are my superhero
spinning in and out of control
evoking the tornadoes

--because if you declare war
you will surely win--

your hair is more furious when you're angry
fighting against a microphone, where your voice lingers

and yes,
I can say it fondly
at first sight we were one
you corrupting your guitar
like it was your slave

"but it is my baby"
echoes -
travels from your tongue to my ears
through the bloodstream

your fascination reminds me of the love I'm searching for

an empty room is only worth filling
if you're in it.

you are picking up your feet
now,
raging back and forth
creating terror, for the stage it is your canvas
and your shoes they are the paint

once you're gone,
dirty patterns from a sole,
fingerprints from when you collapsed
are all that are left

and if you scream
your words of anguish
because you were tormented
and that past
still haunts you

I will be here to vanish that agony
in a second, you will be relieved

yes,
I can say it proudly
I inspire your words
your fingers to make the strings dance
I inspire the thoughts
that pass through your head

to your mouth to the paper

and yes,
I can say it -
however you want me to
soft, softer, softest
because you could provoke an avalanche

--stand right in its path
and you would divide it--

right down the middle.

[stupidxgirl]

I really enjoy your love poems Laura, it's amazing how you capture emotion I could never. I loved this

[thecrazybeautiful]

"--because if you declare war
you will surely win--"

I really like that.

"your hair is more furious when you're angry"

I could not help but smile reading that line. It reminds me of a 'certain someone' I know who always gets on the bus with his hair messed up. I just wanna reach in front of me and fix his hair... But he's really great

"an empty room is only worth filling
if you're in it."

And that there is really nice as well.

This seems a little different from what you've written before, I'm just not sure what the difference is. This is good though

[Absinthe]

"soft, softer, softest
because you could provoke an avalanche"

....Love these lines. Adoring