::Wish I::

[Sharon]

[glow=purple,2,300]yeah yeah i know, too many "wish I" well you know what? i wanted it that way so hehe ;D

::Wish I::

Wish I could write love poetry
long to feel the romance of it,
Had I only one to hold me
desire to love and commit.

Wish I felt the need to express
devotion to one I adore,
But I am nothing but a mess
nothing you have not seen before.

Wish I had the ability
to feel sentiments others feel,
Trapped in my own fragility
my emotions I keep concealed.

Wish I could have my dream fulfilled
to be held, protected, caressed,
Maybe some day prince charming will
rescue this damsel in distress.

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[QueenPaige4]

I loved it..It's very completely thought out. I like it. Hm... it was great ;D

[allmeheart]

very good, but i agree, not complete thoughts all the way thru

[lockely]

Sharon said:

[glow=purple,2,300]yeah yeah i know, too many "wish I" well you know what? i wanted it that way so hehe ;D
[/glow]

[glow=black,2,300]I like all the 'wih I's its like a reocurring them that you keep returning to, which overall make the poem more effective. me likes [/glow]

[Only Me]

i enjoyed it... especially the "wish I" 's...