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Post by XoXo_Branden_XoXo on May 9, 2005 4:29:17 GMT -6
Heres another one i wrote for my girlfriend. I keep the meaning/reason a secret.
No hesitation, No Disbelife at all. My love and desire for you, Is nowhere near small. You keep my heart beating, You brighten my day. No one can make me smile like u do, There's no possibale way. You complete me, Really, you do. There is absolutely no trouble, For me to say "I Love You". I love you for you, The past means nothing. Me and you, and the future, That, for me, is everything. I give you my heart, Let me hold yours. I know its still fragile, But ill charish it, love it, Always and forevermore.
xoxo branden xoxo
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Post by Sharon on May 9, 2005 13:40:29 GMT -6
aren't you just a romantic? if you get a chance, you should run this by a spell check like microsoft word. oh and please reply to others' works as well as posting your orginal work, thanks
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Post by NotSoPerfect on May 9, 2005 14:40:51 GMT -6
yeah def. run it through spell check.
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Post by allmeheart on May 23, 2005 21:01:21 GMT -6
i really like the way u write, i agree w/ all other suggestions though, no need to restate
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