tecoyah
Wishes To Be A Distraction
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Post by tecoyah on Feb 21, 2022 6:50:13 GMT -6
The timer has started this exploding heart The moment we parted and tore me apart Knowing I do my darkened fate Never to find this again no matter the wait I cannot grasp what slipped my mind Losing a treasure so hard to find A failure am I that let you fly Living regret till the moment I die Yet no where within me is room to blame Wishing so much that you felt the same My life was complete the moment you came and nothing ever will be the same.
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Post by Absinthe on Feb 21, 2022 19:16:34 GMT -6
The rhyme in this works really well. There are a few lines that feel a bit heavy on syllables, but overall, nice job.
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