Wide-eyed fears

[stupidxgirl]

a/n: This may sound a little juvenile, but it was supposed to have a kinda...innocent love appeal to it. It's not very good. But all my creative energy has gone *poof* sense I haven't slept yet LoL I am pretty sure it goes in the love part, I mean I meant it to be lovey...not sad LoL But I have trouble writing anything happy I guess.


Fuck the wide-eyed fears
and uncertain emotions;
Why don't you realize I care
and I need to be apart of your
world somehow.

Why can't you feel
for me what I'm not afraid
to feel for you?

Why can't you tell me
words I want to hear
and feel thumping
through my heart
and bouncing happily
off my ear drums.

I want you to touch
my face and send shivers
down my spine
and remind me how it feels
to know someone cares.

Splurge a little and let
yourself go with me
let me find a way to hold on
to you when you can't
hold on to the world.
And when the waves split your
safety boat into a million
pieces,
let me be the one
to rescue you.

Because these wide-eyed
uncertain - brand new
feelings mean you care.

So why wont you tell me?

[Laura]

"and I need to be apart of your "

--apart should be split like "a part" ... maybe that's a personal preference?

"let me find a way to hold on
to you when you can't
hold on to the world"

--this was the only part that really stood out for me. I have nothing to really tell you ... I am no help, eh? I mean it's kind of cliché ... it's hard to do something with it, but you'll always make it sound better than most can.

[thecrazybeautiful]

"And when the waves split your
safety boat into a million
pieces,
let me be the one
to rescue you"

I like that.

This one's kind of... 'blah' if that's any way to describe something.