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Post by downwithquinn on Nov 19, 2013 17:17:33 GMT -6
For Elise:
Love is
painting our nails on the couch
wrapped in a blanket
laughing at David Duchovny
searching for aliens.
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Post by Sharon on Nov 20, 2013 11:28:53 GMT -6
At a glance I thought this was a Haiku  It looks like there some inside story in this one yet, what poem doesn't? This reminds me of my friendship with my closest friends and how we can go for days, weeks, and months even at times without talking but when we are together it's like we never stopped and even when we aren't saying anything it's ok - we're in comfortable silence. |
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Post by downwithquinn on Nov 20, 2013 18:14:19 GMT -6
I do a lot of haikus, but this isn't one of them, no.  I'm glad it makes you feel that sense of closeness you get with someone who knows you well. |
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Post by pandaa on Feb 3, 2014 15:58:16 GMT -6
Short and mysterious. I love it. I can definitely tell, like Sharon, that there is a huge story behind this. Even so, this small bit gives a lot of insight about the relationship. Well done!
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Post by Absinthe on Feb 10, 2014 21:54:48 GMT -6
I like this. It's simple. Sweet. Nice job.
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Post by simplyhomemade on Apr 16, 2014 14:26:12 GMT -6
Just like love this is simple and deep.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 18, 2014 0:01:58 GMT -6
I have to agree ... with simplicity you have created an intriguing story. Very nice ... I quite enjoyed your poem.
jeanne
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It looks like there some inside story in this one yet, what poem doesn't? This reminds me of my friendship with my closest friends and how we can go for days, weeks, and months even at times without talking but when we are together it's like we never stopped and even when we aren't saying anything it's ok - we're in comfortable silence.
I'm glad it makes you feel that sense of closeness you get with someone who knows you well.
