I Won't Be There

[QueenPaige4]

Darkness surrounds what used to be our friendship
Now its just a blur
No one will find this
You cannot break me, I won't allow it
We were best friends who changed into enemies
Then back to best friends
And now to not knowing each other at all
Maybe you were just jealous
Maybe you weren't happy with your life
And you hold me accountable
But I didn't get you pregnant
I didn't force you to have an abortion
I didn't get you fat or made you feel insecure or paranoid
It was all your doing along with your boyfriends
Don't come crawling back when things aren't going your way and you need a shoulder
Because I won't be there

Same friend from the previous poem I posted.

[Sharon]

It's difficult to love others when they'd seem to be intentionally hurting you. Truth is they are needing more love because they feel more alone and they are reaching the wrong way. It's difficult but true friends stick around even when things are rough. Good luck with everything. I things will turn around for the better for your friend.

As for the poem itself just wanted to point out lines 2, 9, and 14 for revision.

Thanks for sharing again... It is clear that this is very personal for you.

[Absinthe]

It is clear you are working through some stuff in this and that's good. Overall, though, not a favorite for me. I do hope everything with this former friend of yours works out.