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Post by QueenPaige4 on Sept 17, 2009 18:12:26 GMT -6
Is it supposed to be okay now that you're here? Everything is just supposed to be perfect now? Are you supposed to make everyone feel whole? I have missed you but where were you when I needed you the most? It just seems like yesterday I was being torn apart And you weren't here to save me to help me be put back together again like Humpty Dumpty But here you are You are back once again Are you going to stay? It's a shame A real darn shame that you've done this You broke my mom's heart once again And not only let her down but you let me down too If only you could see just how much I need you You don't even know And I doubt you even care You have a problem A problem you thought you solved But it's obvious you haven't You haven't changed You're still the same unreliable caring Karen that I've always known That I've always loved Now I just don't know anymore You've disappointed me And you just aren't worth my tears
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Post by Absinthe on Oct 14, 2009 16:00:25 GMT -6
It seems a bit more like prose than poetry. The structure certainly looks like a poem, but the language flows more like prose. It's clear that this was written because it needed to be and technical aspects weren't important. That's okay. We all need to do that sometimes. Its good to get it out.
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