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Post by XoXo_Branden_XoXo on Mar 8, 2009 22:20:16 GMT -6
I want you to know, That i have fallen for you. This feeling is unbelievable, And no doubt, so very true. Everything is rushing, Rushing through my head. But not in a bad way, But the greatest, instead. I hold you in my arms, And this energy surges through me. I just have the feeling, That we were meant to be. Tonight i held you, and in my arms, you fell asleep. Its was not for long, But was a moment, i wanted to keep. Ill be here when you need me, Ill be here forevermore. no doubt, no worries, Your are the one, the only, that I have been searching for.
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trishriley
Wishes To Be A Distraction
I am a new mommy to a beautiful baby boy.
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Post by trishriley on Mar 26, 2009 22:59:54 GMT -6
I really like this poem. My favorite lines:Everything is rushing,rushing through my head. But not in a bad way, but the greatest, instead.
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Post by Absinthe on Jul 31, 2009 21:12:01 GMT -6
There is something about this that I like, but at the same time, something seems off to me. I don't know. I suppose it would make me pretty neutral on this piece.
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