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Post by Sharon on Apr 16, 2005 16:16:16 GMT -6
Please feel free to post your poetry here. I am very much into poetry. I encourage poets to post at least twice as much constructive critism to others' works as their own poems that they post. Defining that further... let's say you post one poem, please try and give at least 2 other comments for two other members' pieces.
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Post by NotSoPerfect on Apr 18, 2005 8:53:11 GMT -6
haha good luck with that rule.
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Post by Sharon on Apr 18, 2005 15:18:34 GMT -6
what is that supposed to mean? lol i'm pretty sure the members here are considerate enough to know that they should comment more than posting their own stuff. at least, i'm REALLY hoping that is the case  |
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darkstar17
Wishes To Be A Distraction
this is me !
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Post by darkstar17 on May 9, 2005 12:40:27 GMT -6
he says i am an angel, the one he truly loved. i say he is a saint, sent from the world above. he said our love was special, i told him our love was true, but 3 months later, i feel literally screwed. he told me of his heart, he lied right to my face, he said we were forever, like a dieing race. now i am broken, dont know what to do, waiting for true love , to tell me what to do. now i think i have fallen, from the world of hate and pain, i think i had fallen, in love with this guy again....... hows that for some poetry*crappy* if you ask me...lol... d**n thinking     |
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