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Alone
May 31, 2007 12:53:24 GMT -6
Post by XoXo_Branden_XoXo on May 31, 2007 12:53:24 GMT -6
Alone
Shadows of Silence. Darkness of Hope. It's all slipping away. It's to much to cope. Few stay strong. The rest slip away. I'm all alone. No one will stay. In his eyes. I can do no right. Perfect I'm not. Failure I might. Sunshine has left. I know now, for good. I go through life. Only wishing we could. Not knowing whats next. My future unknown. Whatever hits me. I face it alone.
That is the poem. Now here is the meaning of everything:
Shadows of Silence. Darkness of Hope. It's all slipping away. It's to much to cope.
--This is where I felt like I was losing everything. IT was me against everything that made me happy and I was losing.
Few stay strong. The rest slip away. I'm all alone. No one will stay.
--The friends that stayed by my side are my truest friends. But I still felt alone.
In his eyes. I can do no right. Perfect I'm not. Failure I might.
--This is about my father. There was a time where it seemed I could do no right for him.
Sunshine has left. I know now, for good. I go through life. Only wishing we could.
--This is about a girl I dated that I really fell for. Didn't work...
Not knowing whats next. My future unknown. Whatever hits me. I face it alone.
--This is pretty self explanatory.
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Alone
Jun 1, 2007 14:31:12 GMT -6
Post by NotSoPerfect on Jun 1, 2007 14:31:12 GMT -6
The explanation really helped me to understand it. That was a very personal poem, thanks for sharing it with us.
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Alone
Oct 5, 2007 7:42:13 GMT -6
Post by Sharon on Oct 5, 2007 7:42:13 GMT -6
I liked that a lot - very personal like Notso said - thanks for the break down.
I could definitely relate to this poem but with the break down on what this poem meant to you - I can clearly see that you've written it based on your personal experience. That's what I love about poetry - it can be meant and interpreted in different ways.
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