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Post by Laura on Mar 12, 2006 16:20:02 GMT -6
virus, infect me destroy my wisdom with your detestion make my pink throat red and suffer, bring me to my knees let the bacteria seep into my incisions unheal all my old wounds
help, you stay away and let my happiness evaporate turn my white nails black and chisel all the slivers off my sickened heart
keep me ill turn my frown into a glare let me die alone just let me die here.
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Post by Absinthe on Apr 16, 2006 13:47:18 GMT -6
"let the bacteria seep into my incisions unheal all my old wounds"
. . . . vivid, but I'm loving it.
"keep me ill turn my frown into a glare let me die alone just let me die here. "
. . . Effective ending.
Good job.
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