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Post by Laura on Feb 9, 2006 17:35:50 GMT -6
I just spent an hour crying but I know you don't care could you just pretend to listen to my unimportant cries
they're just insignificant just like me,
I know you know. I know you know.
the rain hasn't stopped since yesterday when I ran away, I got soaked blended so well with my pinkish eyes all this water still can't stop the crying
it smeared my make up down my face this will be my mask cover me up, I say to you, you only agree cover it all away
no need to say no need to stay painting of a painting of an old photograph lips stained, heart washed away
I know you know. I know you know.
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Post by Absinthe on Mar 10, 2006 5:17:42 GMT -6
This isn't a favorite by you, but I do like this section. . .
"no need to say no need to stay painting of a painting of an old photograph lips stained, heart washed away"
........Other than those few lines, the poem itself is one that strikes me as forgetable (gah....too much AI, I suppose). It was good, but definitely not the best I've seen from you.
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