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Post by Laura on Dec 11, 2005 15:04:26 GMT -6
Seedless, not that I had another thought of trying what blood has been lying under this skin? it seems, just seems to have created a monster -yes- I should be a mother. and love doesn't have room for me should there exist a spirit guide: I have none. what could have become of us? my blood flesh and all that love I would have given has vanished. who took it all away?
I was once a waterfall my body held this lovely pond of life I would send down my juices to let her have a taste.
it was all a waste.
she cannot be recreated she cannot be redesigned -reformed -reshaped
I'm Seedless ...and she can never be replaced.
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Post by Absinthe on Dec 13, 2005 16:14:00 GMT -6
[glow=black,2,300] Wow.....just, wow.
"I'm Seedless ...and she can never be replaced. "
....That line really hits you. Grat job. [/glow]
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Post by NotSoPerfect on Dec 14, 2005 22:27:42 GMT -6
"i was once a waterfall" that is a very powerful metaphor
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