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Post by Angelamongsociety on May 18, 2006 5:33:47 GMT -6
I'm in love with a memory, i'm in love with what once was.
The way you use to kiss me.
And the way you use to hold me.
The way you use to look at me.
And the way you use to touch me.
All the times we have laughed and the times we've cried.
Every moment spent talking, every second spent just sitting in silence.
The good, the bad and the happy and sad.
Knowing you were there made everything complete.
How I use to act and how I am now, are as different as night and day.
The way you have changed me, like I will never be the same.
My feelings for you are still the same, my heart just can't let you go.
I'm in love with a memory, i'm in love with what one was.
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Post by Laura on May 18, 2006 15:42:06 GMT -6
The idea reminds me of a song ... Ani DiFranco's "Rockabye":
"I said today I am leaving In every sense of the word But I'm in love with your memory already Everything I've seen and heard And I will go singing As the solitude sets in In time with the rythym Of everywhere I have been"
The only line I didn't like was:
"How I use to act and how I am now, are as different as night and day."
--just a little cliché ... other than that it's not bad.
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Post by thecrazybeautiful on May 18, 2006 16:17:23 GMT -6
I agree, it's not that bad. But shouldn't the lines with 'use to' be 'used to'? I dunno, it's just something that stuck out and kinda bugged me.
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