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Post by QueenPaige4 on Apr 22, 2006 14:39:47 GMT -6
Note: If I knew what to call this it wouldn't be untitled.
Upsetting thoughts in my head They make me want to cry I miss him, the one The only Aaron that I love I'm afraid to call I'm afraid to tell him how I feel Our friendship ruined My words unspoken in Dreams that make me want to cry But I can't talk about it This problem, no this situation Yes it's not a problem because it's just forbidden love A secret kept within my soul Because I let go I walked away Yes, this isn't a problem I'm content My life is fine because it's okay To cry, to feel sad To be mad To miss Aaron This will all pass Now I go to bed With good thoughts in my head Because I've gotten all my feelings out.
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Post by allmeheart on Apr 22, 2006 20:12:51 GMT -6
This wasn't all that bad of a piece. I'm not sure what to say however, seeing as how my ex was a guy named Aaron, so yeah it leaves me in an awkward state. The line about forbidden love reminds me of a few of my poems but it fit the situation with my ex. I liked the message but I felt awkward because of personal experience, but hey thats just me. ~Jessica~
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Post by QueenPaige4 on Apr 23, 2006 8:43:11 GMT -6
I understand Aaron is a common name...but thank you for your feed back
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