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Post by Samccaleb on Sept 10, 2005 19:53:54 GMT -6
Sunrise On The MountainAt the top of the mountain, I watched the sun come up. The rays of golden light, Warm the earth. Never have I seen such beauty. Never have I felt such peace. One regret mars my enjoyment of this place, And it is that you cant be here with me. You have chosen your own mountain, From which to watch the sun rise, And it is far from my own. A love lost to differences perhaps....I kinda pulled this one out of thin air....or well never mind...thats not polite.
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Post by Only Me on Sept 10, 2005 22:28:15 GMT -6
i really love it... nice work
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Post by Samccaleb on Sept 11, 2005 22:50:55 GMT -6
thank you
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Post by Only Me on Sept 15, 2005 22:29:51 GMT -6
in your location... somewhere is spelled wrong ;)tee hee tee hee... *thinks to herself* "Maybe that was done on purpose" Then replies "Nah... S wouldn't do that " Responds with "OMG I am now officially crazy... I can't believe i just replied to my self" my these walls are hard... i miss my padded room... purple waves purple waves... purple waves.... purple waves...
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Post by Samccaleb on Sept 16, 2005 15:46:36 GMT -6
*rolls in the floor clutching sides* you're figgin hilarious......I'll fix it. Thanks.
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Post by Laura on Sept 17, 2005 9:43:34 GMT -6
I liked the beginning particularly this:
"The rays of golden light, Warm the earth. Never have I seen such beauty"
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Post by Samccaleb on Sept 17, 2005 21:26:14 GMT -6
Thank you
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Post by allmeheart on Nov 22, 2005 17:49:18 GMT -6
nice work, an equal amount of emotion and imagery was shown/used
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