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Post by QueenPaige4 on Jul 28, 2005 15:58:52 GMT -6
I called to see how you were You acted so weird Like you didn't want to talk Like you didn't care Then you said " Paige we should be friends" But I don't see you like that My heart is slowly breaking as you say I'm sorry as you say I don't see you as the happy girl I knew And you don't understand I hate this life I'm living and I said I'm sorry too I felt the tears forming Then I hung up And I started to be hysterical Tears falling down my face And you aren't here to witness this scene My best friend is here She's wiping away my tears She's trying to make me smile to make me laugh And all I want is to cry and cry She's hugging me as I cry And now I wonder was this love a lie?
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Post by Sharon on Jul 28, 2005 16:04:54 GMT -6
[glow=purple,2,300]nice. y'know there are time i've wondered if there was really such thing as love. maybe, only unconditional love exists... like the kind of love between family. then again... for some, even that doesn't exist? I guess we all just gotta have faith right? thanks for sharing this with us. [/glow]
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Post by QueenPaige4 on Jul 28, 2005 16:07:16 GMT -6
thank you sharon
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Post by Absinthe on Jul 28, 2005 16:08:41 GMT -6
That was really good. The reality of most relationships is harsh. Many people get their hearts broken, and it really does hurt. Excellent job.
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Post by QueenPaige4 on Jul 28, 2005 16:15:15 GMT -6
Thank you
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Post by allmeheart on Jul 28, 2005 19:32:40 GMT -6
job well done, i loved it, brought forth a similar emotion from my past, i think its good when you can get involved w/ a poem though
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Post by QueenPaige4 on Feb 3, 2006 15:51:16 GMT -6
once again thank you all
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