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Post by xxrebel86xx on Feb 7, 2006 19:26:20 GMT -6
My life isn't perfect, So I'm not worth it.
Worth the time you gave me, Worth the life I was given.
I'm not the girl you see, I'm not the mystery every boy wants.
Compared to her life, I literally suck.
But you will say, I'm worth it.
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Post by Laura on Feb 9, 2006 10:43:18 GMT -6
I don't really get this ... it's vague and the length doesn't help it either. This:
"I literally suck."
--just doesn't fit ... honestly, I can't see it fitting into any poem. The ending was what confused me ... a little clarity is good.
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Post by thecrazybeautiful on Feb 9, 2006 15:15:48 GMT -6
I'm guessing when the person says you're worth it, you think they're lying? It was a little confusing.. and uh...short.
But, it's a start...
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