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Post by xxrebel86xx on Feb 7, 2006 19:38:50 GMT -6
I cried for him to love me, I even begged him to love me.
He didn't love me.
I told him how I felt, I told him how I cared.
He just stood there.
The tears of joy, The tears of pain.
Memories have just slipped away.
When he looked at me, When he hugged me.
I know its all a game, A master plan for devotion.
But we fought, And the tears fell.
Again, He saw my tears, Behind my hazel eyes.
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Post by Laura on Feb 9, 2006 10:41:26 GMT -6
"I told him how I felt, I told him how I cared.
He just stood there.
The tears of joy, The tears of pain.
Memories have just slipped away."
--this part was good. The ending seemed to go off track. The "again" shouldn't be there and the last line reminds me way too much of the Kelly Clarkson song.
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Post by QueenPaige4 on Feb 10, 2006 15:31:23 GMT -6
yeah laura is right jen but anyway its good
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