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Post by Laura on Jan 17, 2006 17:21:58 GMT -6
How can you hold without me? I'm sure her breasts fit your hands perfectly and your mouth, your kisses how much can they caress how much can they mean without my lips my cheek?
if you're down, you're broken that's how I feel without you.
These midnights are just 12am now all the significance of all the little things have changed and it feels almost like home but it will never be a home without you, I feel
and if I'm crying for no reason, I'll learn someday
How do your 3am hungers go now without me? I'm sure her hands warm you just as much and your bones my frame - they will never fit the same again, I say
it hurts to understand, comprehend,
realize-
and if I'm crying without a reason, I'll learn someday.
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Post by Carissa Marie on Jan 17, 2006 22:33:06 GMT -6
That is so sad... so so sad... thats all i can really say in my present state of mind...
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Post by Only Me on Jan 19, 2006 0:02:52 GMT -6
"and if I'm crying for no reason, I'll learn someday" The repeat of these lines is great. I love this poem. It seems that there is true emotions behind it.
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Post by allmeheart on Feb 2, 2006 16:02:49 GMT -6
seems like both anger and sadness were put into this work, its a nice piece, i enjoyed reading it and the emotion was conveyed perfectly
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