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Post by Angelamongsociety on Aug 4, 2005 13:27:47 GMT -6
Tears swell up, lining my lower lid as I hang up the phone and look at the pictures of us together. I slowly put them away as I wipe my eyes. I just hope this was all just a bad dream.
I am laying on my bed, thinking about everything you said. I try to be brave and I stop crying. It is ok, we will work it out like we always do. Tomorow everything will be the same. You couldn't have broken up with me. You didn't mean it.
It has been 5 days and I haven't heard from you. It hurts so bad, knowing that there is nothing I can do. My heart is breaking, why did I let myself fall in love. We were the perfect couple so they say. Now we have broken up and things can never be the same. Why did you leave me, what can I do to bring us back? Give me the word and I will do anything.
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Post by QueenPaige4 on Aug 4, 2005 13:52:21 GMT -6
I can really relate to this poem. It was really good. Good Job
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Post by Only Me on Aug 6, 2005 0:35:17 GMT -6
i like it... I know everyone experiences at least one bad break up in their life... i know i did, but i was lucky enough that he called me a few weeks into it and said he missed me and he was sorry and we're married now... almost 14 months now...
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Post by allmeheart on Aug 20, 2005 13:39:59 GMT -6
i can relate as well, nice job, well worded, might help if the format was less of a paragraph form though
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Post by Sharon on Dec 20, 2005 20:45:02 GMT -6
[glow=purple,2,300]this was nicely written. the only thing i can suggest is make it so the words seem less cluttered. other than that good job. [/glow]
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Post by badgirl on Jan 23, 2006 12:55:16 GMT -6
I can really relate to this poem. It was really good. Good Job I want to cry because I know why you wrote this. I hope that you will be ok. I hope that it doesn't happen to me. I've been through a lot of heartbrache. I feel you girl. love ya.
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