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Post by Laura on May 24, 2006 16:51:22 GMT -6
a/n: I'm bored so I'm going to write something on the spot. Okay? GREAT.Evolving ... on the spot as I wink to the sky I wonder if you'll see me holding a voice so soprano and I clutch my waist but I can't squeeze this diaphragm anymore from the outside you'll see I can echo better than you ever could the pavement calls my name the chalk anxiously awaiting my roughly smooth grip all the dirt screaming for me to write some sort of novel on the front steps to the porch of this elderly woman's house and I know I'll blame you somewhere riding a cloud hello, I can't be any louder I can't get any better hello can't you hear me? it will take time but you'll see I'll echo better than you ever could I hope when you reach out to touch me you'll fall right on my lap and we'll once again [ hm ] laugh. oh you'll see I'll be evolved by the time you reach me.
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Post by thecrazybeautiful on May 24, 2006 17:05:02 GMT -6
Ooh, I like this for something on the spot. "holding a voice so soprano and I clutch my waist but I can't squeeze this diaphragm anymore" Strange, I was just thinking earlier about how some people don't sing from their diaphragm like it would be better for them to do... "I hope when you reach out to touch me you'll fall right on my lap and we'll once again [ hm ] laugh." Hm, I like that. It kinda explains how I fell about someone right now. I just wanna be able to laugh with him forever. I want him to be able to find a way back into my life when we're older... He's done it before, it could happen again... Ah, I'm rambling... This is good, I like it
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