"The Rain"

[allmeheart]

“The Rain”

The rain is coming
Yes, it’s true
It’s pure
It’s fresh
It’s simple and new

It drips
And it runs
It combines
And it numbs
The pain
And the hurt
That’s inside

It hides
And it heals
Covers and conceals
The lies,
But still sheds light on the truth.

Through the clouds
The rays of sunlight are seen

And the calm before the storm
Wont last
But through the trouble
And mayhem at night
The rain still comes
And it eases all fright

It’s a constant rhythm
A never-ending beat
Look for it
As it pours down your street

It glistens
And it shines
Its deaf
And its blind

It won’t leave you behind
No matter who u are
Or whatever be your race

The rain is coming
Yes, it’s true
It’s pure
It’s fresh
It’s simple and new.

~Jessica~

[Laura]

"It hides
And it heals
Covers and conceals"

--and the last line on that stanza were good ... the last line kind of threw off the rhythm but it's a nice line.

"It glistens
And it shines
Its deaf
And its blind"

--I loved this idea.

The only part I didn't really like was:

"Or whatever be your race"

--I just didn't think it fit well with the poem. Good job though, I liked the idea

[thecrazybeautiful]

I kinda like it. With the rhyming and all...

[Only Me]

"And it numbs
The pain
And the hurt
That’s inside" This part didn't really flow for me all that well, but maybe I am just reading it wrong... ?

"And the calm before the storm
Wont last
But through the trouble
And mayhem at night
The rain still comes
And it eases all fright " i really like the idea of the rain easing the fright.

"The rain is coming
Yes, it’s true
It’s pure
It’s fresh
It’s simple and new" The repitition of these lines really worked for the overall concept of the poem. great work!