jtalago
Contently A Distraction
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Truth
Dec 16, 2005 0:52:20 GMT -6
Post by jtalago on Dec 16, 2005 0:52:20 GMT -6
Wrote this just now. Kind of stuck on this subject. ---------------- Truth
The man is so sure Of his boyish opinion Countless hours Of habitual refrain Turns truth away Brings deception close With it happiness In a storm off the coast The path never veering Reality never hits Never revealing What truth really is
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Truth
Dec 16, 2005 7:17:02 GMT -6
Post by Laura on Dec 16, 2005 7:17:02 GMT -6
I kind of said "neat" after I read it. You like to write short poetry, which fits well for you. A lot of people can't write short poems and end up rambling (hint hint me)
"With it happiness In a storm off the coast The path never veering Reality never hits Never revealing What truth really is"
--the better half of the poem, in my opinion. I liked the subtle rhyme and I love the word "coast"
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Truth
May 30, 2006 17:35:38 GMT -6
Post by Only Me on May 30, 2006 17:35:38 GMT -6
ok. I know I read this one before and wrote out a response... lol maybe I am hallucinating... who knows anyways... "Reality never hits Never revealing What truth really is" those short few lines really hit the point of the poem. short but to the point... effective
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